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I don't think the number of words are important this time... I think the biggest hint as to how the poem flows is 4 iambs, which have been consistent with the first two lines. The poem is written in iambic quadrameter (yes?)toadlguy wrote:Should be 4 words for line two
2nd line is wrong - needs 4 words and gates doesn't rhyme with fategrantsnx wrote:ELEVEN DAYS UNTIL MY FATE
MEET ME JUST INSIDE THE GATES
TON MICHEMUT OURFOY TAINOTR,
SLILT KOUYCIB ENDAR CAPLIMON.
HALLETEK WHITIT SIGNA SEPHREAL:
ELEVEN DAYS, ELEVEN DAYS
What we have so far??
Yes, it does. The S contributes nothing. Or else it's "meets me just inside the gate".toadlguy wrote:2nd line is wrong - needs 4 words and gates doesn't rhyme with fategrantsnx wrote:ELEVEN DAYS UNTIL MY FATE
MEET ME JUST INSIDE THE GATES
TON MICHEMUT OURFOY TAINOTR,
SLILT KOUYCIB ENDAR CAPLIMON.
HALLETEK WHITIT SIGNA SEPHREAL:
ELEVEN DAYS, ELEVEN DAYS
What we have so far??
Good! Let's work with it.kristy2520 wrote:Line 4:
Still you bicker and complain.
Should be:toadlguy wrote:2nd line is wrong - needs 4 words and gates doesn't rhyme with fategrantsnx wrote:ELEVEN DAYS UNTIL MY FATE
MEET ME JUST INSIDE THE GATES
TON MICHEMUT OURFOY TAINOTR,
SLILT KOUYCIB ENDAR CAPLIMON.
HALLETEK WHITIT SIGNA SEPHREAL:
ELEVEN DAYS, ELEVEN DAYS
What we have so far??
Hence the repitition of "eleven days".toadlguy wrote:Remember this is when not where
awesomemeghan2 wrote:not much time for you to train
meghan2 wrote:not much time for you to train