Lonelygirl15

blugh wrote:got a second email from Frank if you all wanna discuss it on his Thread

What did he say?

OK Here's what I think it is (or close to what it is)

Inside the gate you will defend
the myope poet's old needy friend
The picture has not yet commenced
i tossed a corpse in soil fenced
The garden where the killer wined
Still holds a cup for you to find

I think the odd lines are some sort of clue to where the cup is in some cemetary.


Anyway - have at it

I guess my girlfriend and I were possibly right. I would laugh if it was Rose Hills. Not that far from where I live.

I seem to be the only one working here but I think line two is

The myope poet's needy old friend

The myope (someone who sees blury images) poet is cassie
and her needy friend is Frank

I am done - I hope someone finishes this - lines 3 and 4 need work

toadlguy wrote:I seem to be the only one working here but I think line two is

The myope poet's needy old friend

The myope (someone who sees blury images) poet is cassie
and her needy friend is Frank

I am done - I hope someone finishes this - lines 3 and 4 need work

Good night's work man. Sorry I suck at anagrams, but you've been tirelessly plowing away. *hugz!* Way to take one for the team in the middle of the night!

Hmmm...I'll give it a look for ya toadl...maybe I'll suddenly have inspiration...though I doubt it ^_^

I'm currently trying, too, but I'm not good at those anagrams since english isn't my native language

Do you have Anagram Artist?

You can get it here: http://www.anagrammy.com/resources/aa_download.html

Yes

Mordrack wrote:Yes

So the last "real" post I made is where were at - but I'm not really happy with lines 3 and 4 - I think the idea of it being a cemetary is right though so the corpse and soil stuff fit. I think Cassie may be using some words here you wouldn't expect though. Like in the 2nd line. Good Night & Good Luck

Yeah, the word myope left me totally confused... ^^

Mordrack wrote:Yeah, the word myope left me totally confused... ^^

Yeah I had to look that one up But it's actually kind of clever blurry vision - blurry photos etc.

toadlguy... i am not sure where i should post this.. an new comment on Frank's page... user is Cassie.. it has
BEAUTIFY ON PITTANCE ON
WOUNDED INEBRIANT IF FOOLHARDILY
IS DESPOTIC REASON

then some morse code translated to OH YE OF LITTLE FAITH

So the last "real" post I made is where were at - but I'm not really happy with lines 3 and 4 - I think the idea of it being a cemetary is right though so the corpse and soil stuff fit. I think Cassie may be using some words here you wouldn't expect though. Like in the 2nd line. Good Night & Good Luck

I think line 3 could be correct, but 2 and 4 sound wrong.
They don't fit in the iamb|iamb|iamb|iamb pattern. (if that still applies to the poems)

But maybe I'm wrong...


Edit: spelling

blugh wrote:toadlguy... i am not sure where i should post this.. an new comment on Frank's page... user is Cassie.. it has
BEAUTIFY ON PITTANCE ON
WOUNDED INEBRIANT IF FOOLHARDILY
IS DESPOTIC REASON

then some morse code translated to OH YE OF LITTLE FAITH

She's making fun of us again....

OK Here's what I think it is (or close to what it is)

Inside the gate you will defend
the myope poet's old needy friend
The picture has not yet commenced
i tossed a corpse in soil fenced
The garden where the killer wined
Still holds a cup for you to find

I think the odd lines are some sort of clue to where the cup is in some cemetary.

looking back at it now...I kinda like the way it is. Each line follows the progression of ideas to the next, and it does make sense. What was wrong with it again?