Lonelygirl15

can we assume a similar AABBCC rhyme pattern?

ubergeek wrote:can we assume a similar AABBCC rhyme pattern?

I would start that way. But keep other options open

Maybe lines 3-4:

Debuches non os, too late to quit
he shall end his self, atheists spells hit

retch filed horn
ambi | bami | miab | imba

update on the WHAT section

he shall end his self, this atheist's spell

CiW just put up the next morse code poem.

ubergeek wrote:Maybe lines 3-4:

Debuches non os, too late to quit
he shall end his self, atheists spells hit

he shall end his self, ahteists hells spit?

DEDIE HE RHES SLIT
DEDIE HE RHES SDIC

Just so I'm not the only one looking at this, I rearranged the letters on the last line.

alexisme wrote:retch filed horn
ambi | bami | miab | imba

update on the WHAT section

actually that's on the WHEN section...we've got more morse code now too.

ubergeek wrote:CiW just put up the next morse code poem.

Oh no I'm melting melting

ubergeek wrote:CiW just put up the next morse code poem.

I think she's trying to make our brains explode. Sadistic, this girl.

alexisme wrote:retch filed horn
ambi | bami | miab | imba

update on the WHAT section

retch filed horn=for the children?

BAMI and all that = IAMB... iambic. It's the foot of the poem. Two syllables.

Whoops, got too excited and didn't finish what I was saying... an iamb goes unstressed-stressed, unstressed-stressed, etc etc. da-DA da-DA da-DA da-DA.

veriteblesse wrote:

alexisme wrote:retch filed horn
ambi | bami | miab | imba

update on the WHAT section

retch filed horn=for the children?

I was just going to post that !!!

That being said, I still have yet to translate the poem, but we should make a new thread for it.