I took your advice! but just ONE last question

curriguy · Post by **curriguy** » Fri Nov 17, 2006 2:22 am

okay so I listened to all of your feedback and redesigned my TShirt.

Like you guys said, I redrew her in a more "Bree-like" pose...

I know someone wanted me to draw her with her hat...but I'd already started my drawing when I saw that...and now I'm way too tired to ever draw bree again. sorry! (maybe i'll do it a week from now..that hat is damn cute)

someone also suggested that I put the Play-Button on TOP...I tried it, it looked really weird...so I moved it back. sorry!

The new version is Anti-Aliased too (if anyone knows what that means).
if you don't, trust me....it's essential when you're planning to turn an image into a T-shirt

(and I REALLY REALLY hope they like my design and DO turn it into a tshirt)

so here's the new version:
(click on it to make it full size)

my ONLY question is...

should I keep the lonelygirl15.com logo when I submit?
otherwise it'll look a bit more dramatic, like this...

oh and just in case anyone prefers the OLD one...let me know NOW..i'm submitting in like a day or so:

GoodGollyItsHolly · Post by **GoodGollyItsHolly** » Fri Nov 17, 2006 2:56 am

i like the new one without the logo... except for the clevage, thats kinda weird.. other than that it looks really good really sharp. you must have worked your butt off!

curriguy · Post by **curriguy** » Fri Nov 17, 2006 3:10 am

GoodGollyItsHolly wrote:i like the new one without the logo... except for the clevage, thats kinda weird.. other than that it looks really good really sharp. you must have worked your butt off!

haha! you have a GOOD point...there really shouldn't be cleavage...
I've been drawing realistically lately sooo...I guess it slipped...

oops!

it's easily removable though..
and thanks, it def. took some work! I'll mark that as one vote for No-Logo.

P.S.
here's what it'd look like minus the cleavage:

GoodGollyItsHolly · Post by **GoodGollyItsHolly** » Fri Nov 17, 2006 3:15 am

Much better!

the whole thing looks great, and now that the boobies are done it looks perfect!

how do you do that?

Kasdeja · Post by **Kasdeja** » Fri Nov 17, 2006 8:55 am

awesome, curriguy!

PushedButton · Post by **PushedButton** » Fri Nov 17, 2006 1:37 pm

Kasdeja wrote:awesome, curriguy!

Agreed.

AutoPilate · Post by **AutoPilate** » Fri Nov 17, 2006 1:58 pm

Well done, mate.

GoodGollyItsHolly · Post by **GoodGollyItsHolly** » Fri Nov 17, 2006 4:55 pm

I still really really really really like it. just so you know

livelongandprosper77 · Fri Nov 17, 2006 7:06 pm

Genius man pure genius!

curriguy · Post by **curriguy** » Sat Nov 18, 2006 3:36 am

thanks everyone!

edit: I'm gonna try to make a danielbeast one...
we'll see if I get the time

iamcool · Post by **iamcool** » Sat Nov 18, 2006 7:40 am

they are awesome!!!!

Reb · Post by **Reb** » Sat Nov 18, 2006 12:48 pm

Really good

much better than mine,

I would advice you keep the cleavage in, not because I have a dirty mind just because it makes it look more realistic in my oppinion.

canadas_baby · Post by **canadas_baby** » Sat Nov 18, 2006 6:34 pm

Reb wrote:Really good much better than mine,

I would advice you keep the cleavage in, not because I have a dirty mind just because it makes it look more realistic in my oppinion.

I agree ..

curriguy · Post by **curriguy** » Mon Nov 20, 2006 6:33 pm

Reb wrote:Really good much better than mine,

I would advice you keep the cleavage in, not because I have a dirty mind just because it makes it look more realistic in my oppinion.

It definately adds realism but
I want the shirt to appeal to as broad of an audience as possible.

I figure it's better to err on the side of safety...rather than potentially offend/discourage potential buyers?

Also, a little bit of realism can easily be sacrificed given that this is a cartoon

lonelyfan13 · Post by **lonelyfan13** » Mon Nov 20, 2006 11:03 pm

I still think she could be looking more happy in the pic, and I think the color of the arrow would look better if it matched her shirt, or maybe if it was just plain white. and I say, no logo.